Friday, September 20, 2013

Cover Reveal: Enhanced by Courtney Farrell

Welcome to the Cover Reveal for "Enhanced" by Courtney Farrell.

 Enjoy the first chapter provided for your pleasure. 
If you were a fan of the television show Dark Angel you will really enjoy Enhanced!

 Michelle was born into the Institute’s eugenics program, where doctors breed people like

livestock. One powerful man decides which children grow up, and which disappear. Culls are dumped

in the slum outside Institute walls, and those kids never come back. Michelle has survived every purge,

and she’s about to win a luxurious life as a breeder. When her brother and her boyfriend are both

mysteriously culled, despite their high scores, she goes over the wall to find them. Alone in the ghetto,

she’s in trouble until handsome, streetwise Dillon stakes a claim to her. She’s mortified because the

Enhanced see Norms as little more than animals. But the doctor is using the missing boys in a twisted

experiment, and she needs Dillon’s help to stop him. Michelle must rescue the boys, but a plague is

spreading, the doctor is after her, and Dillon isn’t thrilled to help her find her lost boyfriend.

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Enhanced: Chapter 1 

     The door slammed open and a team of white-coated technicians filed grimly into

the classroom. Michelle Atherton automatically relaxed her face into the expressionless mask Enhanced

offspring used to greet any bad news, but under her desk, her fingers gripped each other hard enough

to hurt. The techs lined up against the wall, arms folded and jaws set in identical hard lines. They stared

over her head, refusing to make eye contact with anyone. Doctor Williams came in last, rolling a gurney

outfitted with sturdy nylon straps. He parked it behind the last row of chairs, and teenagers twisted

in their seats to stare. Pressure rose in Michelle’s throat like a scream, but she didn’t dare make a


     Williams dismissed Professor Cole with a perfunctory twitch of his jowly chin.

In agonizingly slow motion, the old teacher set the stack of standardized tests down on her desk and

walked stiffly from the room. Williams closed the door after her. The click of the latch made Michelle


    “Seth Atherton,” Doctor Williams said.

     Blood rushed from Michelle’s head.

     Michelle’s seventeen-year-old brother stood up. “Sir?”

    “You have been selected for a…procedure.” Williams motioned Seth to the gurney.

“Come with us.”

    “What procedure?” Seth’s voice sounded calm and polite, as always, but everyone knew

what he was thinking. People selected for procedures didn’t always come back.

     Williams didn’t answer–not that anyone expected him to. At the doctor’s gesture,

a couple of male technicians stepped up and locked eyes with the rangy dark-haired boy. The bigger

one, a swarthy young man with thighs like tree trunks, pointed Michelle’s brother toward the gurney.

Seth stood his ground.

     He turned to Doctor Williams. “I’ll cooperate, sir. You don’t need the stretcher, I

can walk.”

     Technicians drifted from the wall like wraiths, slowly surrounding him. Michelle’s

head felt like it floated a little way above her body, as if somehow it wasn’t quite connected. Objects

in the room had bright edges, and the coats of the technicians gleamed in brilliant, painful white. Her

brother’s strong hand gripped her shoulder, but she didn’t remember getting out of her chair. He pulled

her close and leaned down to whisper.

   “Michelle.” Seth’s eyes were so dilated that they almost looked black. Narrow rings of

indigo surrounded the reflective pools of darkness. “Don’t do this. You have a chance to grow up here,

become a breeder. I…I just can’t watch you walk out the gate alone.”

    She stared at him with wide eyes, and slowly nodded. Seth inclined his head in that

unconsciously noble way of his, and the technicians fell back, making room. His fingers gripped

Michelle’s arm. Pain dimly penetrated her nightmare, so she let her brother walk her a couple of steps

and press her back down in her chair.

    “Stay here, Michelle. I’ll be fine.”

     Michelle blinked hard at the tears that threatened to shame them both. “Sure.

You’ll…be fine.”

     Seth nodded once and turned away. He strode to the gurney, climbed aboard and

stretched out on his back. With sharp metallic clicks, technicians ratcheted down the straps.

     They rolled him away.

     The teens sat for a moment in stunned silence before the whispering began. “I

can’t believe they’re culling him!” Sylvia blurted.

    “That’s not how it’s done,” Jeanette said disdainfully. “They didn’t line us up at the gate,

and besides, with his scores, that’s not going to happen.”

    “Maybe they don’t like his attitude,” said Seth’s best friend Brian. “The way he plays the


     Michelle glanced sharply at the big blond-haired senior. “You mean the way you


    The door opened again and the technicians came back in with a second wheeled


    Carissa’s face blanched as the technicians marched toward her. “It’s me, I knew it.”

      The tawny-haired girl stumbled out of her chair and squeezed behind Brian’s

broad back, like that could save her. He murmured to her softly and reached up to cover her hand with


    “Brian Halstead,” the swarthy tech said, flexing his thick shoulders in an unspoken

challenge. Carissa’s breath caught audibly in her throat.

     Brian stood up slowly, with the oiled grace of a predator. “Yes, sir.”

     He emphasized the word a little and the tech’s eyes narrowed. Nobody called

technicians sir. A little smirk played along the corners of Brian’s mouth. He took a step or two toward

the gurney, but hesitated by Michelle’s chair until she looked up.

    “For Seth,” Brian whispered, giving her a wicked little smile.

     Michelle sat up straight and scanned the white-coats. Doctor Williams had gone,

leaving a bunch of low ranking techs to deal with Brian alone. Big mistake. What’s he going to do?

     As Brian sauntered down the aisle, people in the back of the classroom scooted

out of their chairs and clustered in front by Professor Cole’s desk. That should have alerted the

technicians, but it didn’t.

    “Clearly, there’s a reason that they’re only technicians,” Jeanette Morley said, right out

loud, and her girlfriends giggled.

    “Get on the stretcher,” the burly technician growled at Brian.

     Brian grinned. “Thanks, but I’m not interested in participating.”

    “It’s not optional.”

    “That’s not the way I see it.” Brian cocked his head and waited until the tech made the

mistake of grabbing his arm.

     “I turned eighteen last fall,” Brian said, and the guy let go fast. It was too late.

      With both hands, Brian lifted the stretcher off its wheels and slammed its edge

into the man’s stomach. The swarthy one went down, along with another white-coat with the bad luck

to be standing next to him. Techs swarmed the big blond-haired teenager, trying to overcome him by

sheer numbers. Michelle cheered along with the rest of the class when Brian made a hole in the drywall

with some guy’s head, but a petite female nurse snuck up behind him with a syringe.

     “Look out, behind you!” screamed Carissa.

      Brian slumped horribly to the floor, and four white-coated men lifted his body

onto the stretcher. They rolled him away while Michelle wrapped her arms around herself and shook.

After the last technician filed out, Doctor Williams stuck his head in, surveyed the damaged wall with

a slightly sick expression, and then closed the door like a dog owner making sure his pets didn’t get


      Jeanette laughed until her face turned pink. “Did you see how Brian set that up?

The Conclave can’t touch him for that!”

     “What!” Michelle snapped.

     “Don’t you get anything, Michelle?” Jeanette rolled her eyes. “Brian’s eighteen.

Technically that makes him an adult, whether he’s finished high school or not. With the scores he gets,

he outranks every technician at the Institute. He doesn’t have to follow their orders.”

      “So when he wakes up from whatever sick experiment they’re doing on him,

they can’t punish him any worse. Sure, that’s just hysterical, Jeanette. I’m glad you enjoyed it so much.”

Michelle abruptly fell silent when the door opened once again.

     This time, when they came, they came for her.

     Michelle trembled on the exam table in the Genetics Clinic. A puncture wound in

her leg slowly dripped blood onto the polished floor, but she ignored it. Technicians were testing the

biopsied muscle segment, and Norms existed to clean up the mess. A child sobbed softly on the other

side of the wall.

      Don’t go. Doctor Salomon could walk in any second, Michelle told herself,

crumpling her disposable hospital shift in sweaty hands. But he won’t, another part of her mind

whispered, the buried part that knew exactly what Salomon was doing in the room next door. He’s not

finished with her yet. Michelle fidgeted on the paper-covered bench, trying to repress the thought. She

smoothed away the telltale wrinkles in the horrible white paper poncho, but they’d be able to tell. They

could always tell.

     Michelle tucked her chin and wrapped her arms across her flat stomach, as

though she could hide under her veil of long dark hair. The antiseptic scent of the clinic always twisted

her guts into a knot. Suddenly she pushed off the table, landing barefoot on the freezing cold tiles.

Crimson droplets of blood marked her passage toward the door, but the bleeding quickly stopped. In

another hour the wound would be completely healed. She hesitated, calculating the odds. Can I go find

Seth and get back before Salomon does? Not likely. But if I don’t, I’ll go crazy.

      Michelle eyed the closed door, considering escape. But escape was only for the

losers who got culled. Brian claimed that would be a relief, but he tried as hard as anyone to avoid it. No

one knew what happened to the culls after they were dumped in the slum. They probably live out there

like kings, ruling over the Norms. Even a cull could out compete them.

      In a savage motion Michelle tore off her paper shift and let the fragments drift to

the floor. Glaring surgical light reflected off her sleek muscles, golden skin, and the flawless features of

her face. She snatched up her clothes as fast as she could. A child’s shrill scream paralyzed her with one

leg in her pants.

      Doctor Salomon’s voice rumbled through the wall, taking that quietly insistent

tone he used with little girls. “Be quiet, Jennifer, or I’ll bring one of your sisters in here instead. Is that

what you want?”

     Michelle took a ragged gasp as everything she’d tried so hard to forget flooded

to the surface. She yanked on her clothes and skidded across the floor in her socks. The door had been

locked from outside. She rattled the doorknob frantically, but no one came. The child next door got

louder, and something in there crashed to the floor. The little girl’s hysterical pleading shifted into a

high-pitched scream. A man bellowed, followed by the unmistakable sound of someone being slapped

hard with an open hand.

      “Help, help!” Michelle pounded on the door and twisted the doorknob so hard

that the metal itself sheared and broke off in her hand.

       She half expected to hear nurses’ running feet, but no one came. Without

thinking, she kicked the door open, bolted into the hall and slammed a shoulder into the closed door of

the next room. It unexpectedly flew open, and Michelle tripped over an overturned chair just inside. She

crashed to the floor and whipped her head around, but the doctor was already gone. A red-haired girl

about nine years old peered over the edge of the exam table. A sore pink handprint stood up across the

child’s face. Blood speckled the front of her little paper poncho.

     Michelle scrambled to her feet, feeling stupid. She reached gently for the child,

who flinched away. “Jennie? Sara? Which one are you? Um, sorry,” Michelle trailed off, embarrassed.

Everyone else seemed to be able to tell the triplets apart.

     “I’m Jennie.”

     “Easy, Jennie. I won’t hurt you. You’re bleeding.”

     “It’s not my blood,” the little redhead said, her blue eyes flashing defiantly. “I bit


      Michelle couldn’t help laughing, but she stifled the sound behind her hands.

Around here, anyone could be listening. “Good. He had it coming, I’m sure.”

      The child slid off the table, clutching her paper shift tightly to her chest with both

tiny fists. “He told me he had to check and see if I had cancer, you know, inside.”

     “Oh, that’s--” Michelle cut herself off before blurting, “just what he used to tell

me.” Instead she said, “That’s not true. The Enhanced can’t get cancer, sweetie. That flaw got bred out

generations ago.”

     Jennie bit her lip, trying not to cry. “He lied.”

     Michelle squatted down to get on eye level with the little girl. “Yeah, he did. So

tell your mom right away.”

    “They showed her the gate when I was a baby.” An angry tear escaped down Jennie’s

cheek, but she flushed and quickly wiped it away. Michelle politely pretended not to notice.

      The little redhead crept in to whisper. “You shouldn’t try to help me. You know

what he’ll do.”

      Michelle went cold, imagining the consequences. “I know, but I heard you

scream, and…”

      Jennie surprised her by giving her a hug. “Don’t be stupid, Michelle. It’s bad here,

but it’s worse Outside.”

      Michelle walked down the hall alone, feeling like a prisoner about to face the

firing squad. A couple of young male technicians chatted outside the surgical suite. They’d know she had

no business in there, and with her genetically enhanced IQ, getting lost wasn’t an excuse. She smiled a

little, trying not to look guilty as her heart pounded. Their eyes roamed over her body, but they stepped

aside to let her pass. Michelle was an Atherton, after all, the daughter of not only one, but two members

of the Conclave. That made her royalty here. At least until my first citation for noncompliance.  

      Michelle glanced over her shoulder at the men, pretending to check them out.

They winked and leered, and laughed when she blushed. She bent her head over her papers as though

double-checking a room number and pushed through the double doors. She held her breath, expecting

them to stop her. They didn’t. Michelle slowed her stride at the receptionist’s desk, hoping Seth’s

mysterious procedure would be listed on the computer there. A young female receptionist sat behind

the clear plastic counter. The brunette’s short legs and pudgy body gave her away as an Augment,

a Norm enhanced only enough to qualify her for a job. Augments instinctively obeyed orders from

Enhanced adults, but not from the kids. Am I old enough? Will she tell me?

     Salomon’s petulant voice came from an office opposite the receptionist’s desk,

making Michelle forget all about the little brunette. “You’re worthless, Williams! I can’t leave you alone

for a minute. That’s why you’re still a technician, so stop asking.”

      The door opened and Michelle ducked around a corner, but caved in to the

temptation to peek. Doctor Salomon emerged, trailed by Doctor Williams, the eternal technician. The

unfortunate man took shallow breaths, sucking in his tubby stomach, but it still made him look like a


      The small white-haired director poked a bandaged finger at Williams’ face. “All

you had to do was remain in the room, but apparently that was too complicated for you. Those damages

are coming out of your paycheck. Now I’m late for surgery, and you’re assisting.”

     “Thank you for the opportunity, sir,” the balding technician said. His eyes

remained downcast, but a note of hope crept into his voice.

      Salomon’s overpowering cologne drifted around the corner and stung Michelle’s

throat. It smelled like pain. She pushed off the wall and hurried away. Ahead, a line of Enhanced

offspring waited for Augment security guards to inspect their documents. She abruptly changed

direction and rushed down another corridor, fighting down panic. Sweat began to soak through her

blouse, and her breath came in rapid gasps. Orderlies scooted out of her way, and one of them flicked

his wrist, activating his implanted cell chip. Is he calling security? Michelle fought against the wave of

irrational terror, but had no hope. She dodged a couple of white-uniformed nurses and gave in to the

impulse to run.

       Anxiety disorders sometimes manifested in kids selected for extremely

high IQs, and doctors doggedly rooted out the flaw. Most of the other carriers had already been selected

for procedures. Speaking their names was forbidden, so it felt safer to forget them. Michelle brought

their faces to mind in a desperate bid for self-control. The little brown-haired girl who used to cry on the

high ropes course–that one never made it past fifth grade. The freckle-faced seventh-grade boy who got

eliminated when he refused a two-on-one sparring match in karate class. The images of the lost slowed

her headlong rush, but not quickly enough.

     A group of students crowded the hall around the corner. Michelle careened

sideways, slammed a hand loudly against the wall, and plowed right into Jeanette Morley, of all people.

Beauty wasn't the goal at the Institute, but Jeanette sure acted like it was. The team that designed

her pulled out all the stops, giving her a slender, sculpted body, large breasts, and blonde hair that

cascaded down her back. Looks weren’t supposed to count here, but they did, especially when it came

to influencing people.

      The blonde shoved Michelle away and then started ripping her a new spleen.

“Yeah, instead of arriving on time, go ahead and run us all over, you cull. God, Michelle, you’re

so…Normal. No wonder you have no friends.”

      “I’m her friend,” Carissa said softly, stepping between Jeanette and Michelle with

a visible effort.

      “Thanks, Carissa,” Michelle told the mousy girl, trying to be kind. “I’m your friend


      “Low-ranks and recruits.” Jeanette gave Carissa a critical once-over and rolled

her eyes. “Like they count. I guess, if that’s the best you can do.”

      Jeanette’s younger brother Todd wove through the crowd, slipping easily

between the muscular boys. On him, the genes that gave Jeanette her delicate beauty just looked

scrawny. “Hey, Michelle. Worried you’d be late?”

      “Um, yeah.” Michelle peeled a sweaty curl off her forehead and looked back

down the hall. No one followed, and she felt like an idiot for losing control.

      Todd took her by the elbow and guided her to the wall. His touch calmed her

pounding heart. “This test isn’t for freshmen,” he murmured, almost inaudibly, but she heard him

through her bones. “What are you doing here?”

      She didn’t answer. His eyes searched hers as he lightly lifted the truth from her

mind. “Oh. Living dangerously.”

      “Get out of my head, witch!” Michelle snapped, way too loud, but Todd only

laughed in that wheezing nerdy way of his.

       He put his mouth to her ear and whispered. “They’re in outpatient

surgery, room seven.”

      “Thanks! I’ve got to go, I’m not supposed to…” Michelle faltered and fell


      “Obviously,” Todd smirked. “Get going before the wrong people notice.” He shot

a fast glance at his sister, who clustered with her followers.

       Michelle turned away and stepped on someone’s foot. “Oh, I’m sorry,”

she said, and then saw who she’d crunched. A green-uniformed Norm hurriedly pulled his laundry cart

out of her way. Sniggers broke out among the teens and Michelle blushed. One didn’t speak to Norms,

except to give instructions. Apologizing to them was unheard of. They were little more than animals, and

they wouldn’t understand.

       “My fault, Miss,” the small black-haired Norm mumbled, eyes respectfully

downcast. A muscle on the young man’s jaw clenched and released, and he cast a glance of veiled

hatred toward the smirking crowd of kids. Michelle wouldn’t have thought a Norm would know when he

was being laughed at, but this one obviously did. A flush of anger rose to her cheeks, but her glare didn’t

stop her classmates’ giggles. Suddenly she hated them too.

       “It wasn’t your fault!” Michelle blurted, startling the pimple-faced boy

into meeting her eyes for a second. “I ran into you.”

       The entire hallway fell silent as the Normal teenager flushed under the

scrutiny of dozens of impossibly beautiful Enhanced. Michelle shrugged apologetically, and the worker

surprised her with a wry grin. Mentally kicking herself for attracting attention, she slipped around a

corner and walked away.

       One advantage of breaking rules when no one else did was that

authorities never expected it. In the outpatient surgery wing, nurses and orderlies bustled everywhere,

but no one noticed one girl standing against the wall. Michelle peeked through the tiny window in

the door of room seven. Her brother sat rigidly on an exam table. Seth’s handsome face remained

impassive, but he kept running a hand through his hair, making it stand on end. He stopped when

Salomon walked in. Williams followed, carrying a tray shrouded under a blue surgical cloth. Instead of

asking, the chubby technician just put a hand on Seth’s chest and shoved him down on the table. Two

thick nylon straps pinned the boy on his back. Salomon chose a gleaming silver scalpel from his tray.

       Seth averted his eyes from the scalpel and spotted his sister standing in

the doorway. A flicker of fear crossed his face, quickly masked. The doctor bent over the boy’s arm and

made a quick incision without bothering to numb it first. Seth’s night-blue eyes glazed with pain, but he

didn’t even twitch when the doctor pulled the edges of the incision wide and used a couple of stainlesssteel clamps to hold it open. Michelle couldn’t look at the blood dripping down her brother’s arm, and

focused on his dark eyes instead. They looked strange to her, too old for his young face.

       When Salomon turned away to open an incubator, Seth mouthed

something at her. It took Michelle a moment to make out her brother’s words. “Go! Before you get one


 “One what?” she mouthed back, just as Salomon returned to Seth’s side. The petite gray-haired

man now wore a surgical mask, and he cradled something carefully in his gloved hands. He glanced up

and Michelle recoiled just in time, jerking back around the corner. That did it. A suspicious middle-aged

nurse strode toward her, elbowing aside some low-ranking aids and a Normal janitor. Clutching her fake

documents to her chest, Michelle fled.

Courtney Farrell was once a molecular biologist, but her habit of daydreaming destroyed far too

many experiments. As it turned out, writing down the movies behind her eyes was a lot more fun than

lab work. Courtney is the author of fourteen nonfiction books for young people, mostly on social and

environmental topics. She lives with her family on a Colorado ranch where they support a barn full of

freeloading animals, including a fat draft horse and a bunch of crazy chickens. Enhanced is her first







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